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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Divine Drink

    Hey, so I enjoyed the essay, it was really enjoyable to read. I don't breakfast, you know. I'm not really sure what you're trying to say in this sentence. The ...

    Oct 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    This made me laugh. I liked the humor and the nice message in the end. So, I think I might read some of your other works because you said they ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re:

    This was an awesome poem! It was sort of deep but not too deep. And I really liked the opening line, and the last line. The length of the entire ...

    Jul 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed.

    I loved this story! I thought it was funny how Marco flipped off his dad while he was driving off, and the description of Sophia was great. Keep writing, I'm ...

    Jul 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye, my love.

    It is a very good poem. I liked it a lot. I'm not a good poet, so I'm not really a good judge on poetry, but this is very good ...

    Jul 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Dying Ember

    Thanks!

    Jul 11, 2011


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