CrimsonAngel

Thank you

Thank you for he help and I will use this in later writing.

Thank you for thr advise and it was very helpful so hopefully with it can improve.

Thank you for your criticism and for the suggestions.

Thank you for the criticism and for sharing how you felt about it with me I'm am grateful and I'm also glad that you enjoyed it.

Of course,it was a wonderful piece and really deserves more credit.

I really like this poem it shows a point of view of something simple and wove it into something most wouldn't think of,it is in a way hunting yet beautiful ...