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Re: relationship steps.
It's nice, some capitilization, unless that was how you intended on writing it? It's really sweet and short, the flow of the stanzas were nice, maybe you could of used ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Last Petal
Hello, I enjoyed your piece, it was well written, I liked your use of language, the flow was good, some stanzas didn't flow that well, but that's just me. I ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
Hi! Aww, I loved this, really cute. I know not the best word choice. Anyways, despite it not having descriptive words, it's nice, it's just a simple poem, about well, ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Curse creeping through the woods
Hi, I am a new user to this site, I very much enjoyed your poem. Keep on writing! :) I'm sorry if this wasn't a critical and detailed review, I'm ...
Feb 21, 2011