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Oh my! This took a glorious turn! I expected a birthday party, not a massacre! Lol, but I enjoyed it! Despite some grammar errors, I enjoyed the story. I love ...

This is so jolly! Lol, I liked it! I was surprised at how fast Adrianne and James got together! Now, I don't know if you wanted to stress how much ...

This is very... Real. I understand how this feels and you've done well describing it. I don't experience this all the time, though:) I like how you used simple sentences, ...