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Re: Riches to Rags
Great story! I loved the incredible detail you put in, and there was just enough backstory so that it didn't take away the "Short Story" aspect. Just a couple things ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: The Worker of Dreams
Great story! You have the right idea, although I must say the abrupt change from Chapter 1 to Chapter 2 had me confused. You clearly stated that the main character ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: 滴答
Great job! Fun plot, the story was easy to follow, well-made characters, and the story was very descriptive and rich. There are only a few things I have to say: ...
Mar 1, 2016 -
Re: From Bad to Worse
This is a review. Good job! You have a nice plot and the story was fun to read. Just a couple things to say: You have quite a few run-on ...
Mar 1, 2016