Cotton

Hey there :) I won't pretend to know your story, but I have noticed that there are some grammatical and punctuation-related things I could help you with, so I'll probably ...

Is it just me who can't see it? Sorry, posted this in the wrong section. Transferring it over to the correct one! Does this mean the story exists elsewhere? If ...

hello :D I've become honed and streamlined in my method of reading pieces and picking out the small errors in grammar or punctuation or whatever that mere mortals miss (mwahahaha... ...

hey :D I'm new (sorry) so I thought, for such a clearly defined, well-written, interesting story, I'd take on the role of simply being your error-checker - there were so ...

hello :D I've not read any of this before, but you managed to write this in such a way that I didn't feel lost, and doing that without foresight is ...

hi there :D it says Part 6, but I'm coming to this with no prior knowledge and yet I felt like this could have been the first part. You made ...

hello :D grammar and punctuation nut, at your service! I haven't read the first chapter, but your writing made me feel like I hadn't missed anything... not in a the-first-part-must-have-been-really-du

hey :D I haven't read the earlier parts, because I'm just zipping around and pointing out grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but I got the story. You told me exactly what ...

hello :D I am grammar and punctuation freak, here to irritate - nice to meet you! Generally, you have a nice variation of sentence structure and go beyond just "bla ...

hello :D I have to confess, I'm here to point out grammar and punctuation stuff so I won't be very helpful on plot matters and such. Generally, you used a ...

hello :D I haven't read the other parts, I confess, but I'm all fired up with correcting grammar and punctuation so I'll just go through and see if I can ...

Hi :D I reviewed your first chapter, and thought I'd check in to see how it's going. As a mainly grammar and punctuation corrector, I won't comment on the content, ...

Hello :D This is hauntingly moving and awfully relateable. Literally awful, because I bet there's a million girls who know exactly this feeling, or close enough. Your descriptions are accurate ...

hi :) so the story is interesting, and reasonably well executed. You definitely knew at the beginning what exactly was going to happen and when, and that came off - ...

Well you certainly took me by surprise. With that opening, I'd been expecting some love-sick puppy who would spend the next however many words pining. Oh, no. This is hilarious! ...