Cornelius_Quinnsomer

I enjoyed it. The only parts that give me trouble are: "touching, nevertheless it was touch, But a stupid touch all the same," Stupid isn't the best word to use ...

"I now realize I smoke for simply one reason, and that is spite. I hate you non-smokers with all of my little black fucking heart, you obnoxious, self-righteous, whining little ...

I really liked this. A lot. As for the feminism women praising.... Come on now, girls and guys and men and women are all the same. Rather, we ought to ...

I really like the first half of the first, and the second half of the second. The words 'cut' definetly make it and complete it. The middle however gets repeatitive ...

The first three lines are perfect. But then I'm not feeling it until "My arms..", which, that and after is great as well. I think it's the 'Saguaro', but I ...