Corncob

little discussed? is discussed A LOT. Not trying to be offensive, but do you realize just how much this topic is relentlessly debated?

You do realize people don't CHOOSE to be homosexual, right? Secondly, it's not a disorder, so we're not "praying for them" as if there is something wrong with them. Please ...

@Ozz I'd be interested to hear your side of the story; i.e. why you are against gay marriage.

Thanks so much for the review. Your suggestions are really good, and I am definitely going to take them to heart. Thank you!

Sure-I'll try to do it soon, but sorry if I can't get it done quickly.

Sorry if I was a bit too harsh....

Thank you for the review!

Yah, sorry I had to go suddenly, but now I will finish the review!

I don't know if this is what the author intended, but I think a lot of the story was to show that what she looks like, how she dresses, appearance, ...

Yes, you're right about them being college, and I am definitely going to go back and edit this to make it more understandable. I was worried that would be hard ...

Wow, thanks! I was really nervous about posting this, so thanks a lot for the support!

OK. I know that's a lot to "suggest" so take your time :)

Haha, I loved the intent of this poem. It was just perfect, and your style and content fitting the intent perfectly. The author's note explains it all. 10/10 Keep writing! ...

oh wait, yes. ok good i feel less foolish

Wait. I just read the other reviews and realized this is meant to be a deleted poem. (I didn't read the actual version, I only read the deleted version.) Well, ...