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Re: The Last Word
The Last Word There it is—a faux pas in society, ((of instead of in)) lying ((comma)) feeble on this very page, ((I feel you can put a period here)) a ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: If Art Could Speak...
I sometimes get my ideas for stories or poetry from simply thinking about something stupid. Maybe one day, I'll say, "What's it like to get hit by a car? Does ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: my fair william
face always covered, by the hair, alone and hurting, too many problems, ((this is incredibly overdone and cliché)) im ((I'm, capitalize Is and use proper contractions. I understand its poetry ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: Girls just wana' have fun
She wondered the lonely sodden city streets, the evening’s vain festivities now done. Light caught in a pool of vomit ((comma)) casts her face sneering at her doppelganger below, ((period)) ...
Aug 17, 2008
