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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Last Word

    The Last Word There it is—a faux pas in society, ((of instead of in)) lying ((comma)) feeble on this very page, ((I feel you can put a period here)) a ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: If Art Could Speak...

    I sometimes get my ideas for stories or poetry from simply thinking about something stupid. Maybe one day, I'll say, "What's it like to get hit by a car? Does ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: my fair william

    face always covered, by the hair, alone and hurting, too many problems, ((this is incredibly overdone and cliché)) im ((I'm, capitalize Is and use proper contractions. I understand its poetry ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Girls just wana' have fun

    She wondered the lonely sodden city streets, the evening’s vain festivities now done. Light caught in a pool of vomit ((comma)) casts her face sneering at her doppelganger below, ((period)) ...

    Aug 17, 2008


i think once every new ywser realizes they can manifest themselves into the quote gen by making a post about the quote gen, they make a very inconspicuous post about the quote gen, but deep in their hearts, they know they’ll see that post at the bottom of the page one day. (yeah, i see you mods. you brought this upon us)
— Avian