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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Last Word

    The Last Word There it is—a faux pas in society, ((of instead of in)) lying ((comma)) feeble on this very page, ((I feel you can put a period here)) a ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: If Art Could Speak...

    I sometimes get my ideas for stories or poetry from simply thinking about something stupid. Maybe one day, I'll say, "What's it like to get hit by a car? Does ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: my fair william

    face always covered, by the hair, alone and hurting, too many problems, ((this is incredibly overdone and cliché)) im ((I'm, capitalize Is and use proper contractions. I understand its poetry ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Girls just wana' have fun

    She wondered the lonely sodden city streets, the evening’s vain festivities now done. Light caught in a pool of vomit ((comma)) casts her face sneering at her doppelganger below, ((period)) ...

    Aug 17, 2008


The best and most beautiful things in the world can not be seen or even touched - they must be felt with the heart.
— Helen Keller