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Re: "Scarred"
It’s me again! This was sad, but it’s accurate towards feelings of what others think of you. Although you say you may not care if people don’t like you, it ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Innocence
This was a beautiful way of portraying the fact that kids shouldn’t lose their innocence too soon. I see too many kids attempting to grow up when they’re only six. ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1:A Not So Good Beginning.
Thank you for your reply! For the picnic preparations, I put all that in there because I wanted to give the reader the contents about the picnic, but you%u2019re right, ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1:A Not So Good Beginning.
Hey! Thanks for the review! I%u2019m sorry that I didn%u2019t reply sooner. As for your question about Tim%u2019s sighing, I put that touch there because I%u2019m one of those people ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: "The Remains of Paper and Ink"
This was very sweet! In my opinion, this captures the essence of feeling love again after something tragic happens. It’s like poetry without rhyming, and that’s something that resonates with ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1:A Not So Good Beginning.
If you’d like me to continue the story, let me know on the comment section as well as reviews and critiques!
Dec 27, 2017
