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This is a good story, unclear at the beginning about what the objective of the story is, but does seem very interesting. The opening scene causes slight confusion, does he ...

This is a beautifully written piece. Elegantly put together, ending fantastically. The story in the beginning I didn't know what was to come of it. One part; "Devoted little angel ...

I've never been much into poetry but this... This is amazing. You are a great writer, the fact there is a whole story among those few lines shows so much ...