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Re: So Untouched
Finally! A story that's short yet a good start :) Usually they're extremely lengthy, and start to be a bore throughout, but I think you ended the first part at ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)
I personally think that the story needs a bit more emotion behind Aspasia, even though we understand the face that she hates her mom and she's completely miserable, I think ...
Jan 2, 2009 -
Re: nvm 7
Hey I'm Sara! :) I like it. It's not the best, but I think that you definitely have a good start to this. I personally think if you're going to ...
Jan 2, 2009