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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Masquerade

    The dialogue between characters seems... disconnected. I'd say unrealistic in a way. I've never met nor heard of a person who (after a few months of school) asked the person ...

    Oct 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Adventures of Death and Plague (chapter two)

    Hmph. I've got a strange sense of Deja Vu from reading this, like I've seen it before. Anyways, your editor is really good, you should give whoever it is props ...

    Mar 21, 2011


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins