Complicated101

Heyy :) Ella was sitting at the back of the hot sticky classroom, staring blankly at the white board as their new form tutor, Mr Colling, was droning on and ...

Heyyy, first off sorry this is so late, things have been mad. Anyway I would ramble on but this is late as it is. I stumbled along the beach, avoiding ...

Heyy man, Okay so it has potential, but it's a bit rough? Anyway on with the critique. I'm hiding up the only maple tree in this part of the forest, ...

Hello :) Sorry this is so late but things have been mad :shock: Anyway on with the critique At half till seven I don't like this bit, it makes me ...

Hey elephantwalrus - great name by the way. Anywayyy I just read through and here's my various opinions and nit-picks :) Most people [s]can[/s] complain about awkward moments where they ...

Hey, I've not really done much critiquing before, but I suppose you've got to start somewhere, so I'm going to have a go :) It sounds sweet - comparing something ...

Hello :) I'm Complicated101 and I'm going to tell you what I think of this piece of writing and, hopefully, help you to improve. This King was a loving and ...

I wiped the crust from my eyes and [s]laid [/s] lay (I think) [s]there [/s]thinking about my day ahead of me I'd ditch the there and replace it with something ...