Colier

I enjoyed your poems, especially this line, which offers a clear cut and simple image: Apollo sigh-slipped into her coffin. I do have problems with poems that offer too many ...

I had a few difficulties, namely this portion of your piece: where we can stand linked apart, and I can see the end in your eyes but cannot view the ...

I couldn't read it all but I have a few comments, not all of which are demonizing. He turned his face to the side to take away the worst, and ...

Haha this is very interesting. I am going to post an old poem I have on here tommorow, it has a similar theme. How we use the word love where ...

I like the Thomas Hardly kind of word punch at the end. That is an old technique and your style reflects what sounds like a developed taste in literature (got ...

Yeah, I was going to point out the grammar problems too. Although your writing DOESN'T suck, and it does have good description of images, particularly setting, your lack of proper ...