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Re: I have no idea
I'm thinking maybe you should have put "Eyes the colour of fish fin" underneath "Colourful eyes" and "Skin the colour of milk" underneath "Colourful skin". It might make it better ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Words
It's good and original, but something about the why it's written was confusing me...I really don't know why. The ryhming is pretty good, and I do like the meaning to ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Sohma House
I have never watched the show before, so I don't get half of this poem. It is quite well written. It could have been better...I think...Maybe. xD And aren't poems ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Short story fantasy beginning
This is a very confusing story. There are too many long and confusing words that you would have to search the dictionary to find their meaning. I'd advise using the ...
Apr 21, 2009