ColeHeart

I'm thinking maybe you should have put "Eyes the colour of fish fin" underneath "Colourful eyes" and "Skin the colour of milk" underneath "Colourful skin". It might make it better ...

It's good and original, but something about the why it's written was confusing me...I really don't know why. The ryhming is pretty good, and I do like the meaning to ...

I have never watched the show before, so I don't get half of this poem. It is quite well written. It could have been better...I think...Maybe. xD And aren't poems ...

This is a very confusing story. There are too many long and confusing words that you would have to search the dictionary to find their meaning. I'd advise using the ...