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ColdHeart

  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Message To My Ex

    Great writing and the message of the poem was given well, good job and keep it up!

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: Thinking

    There are tiny errors but otherwise the writing is great and the idea/message was given well. One more thing is that this piece is relatable; I suggest you continue to ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: Thinking

    There are tiny errors but otherwise the writing is great and the idea/message was given well. One more thing is that this piece is relatable; I suggest you continue to ...

    Jun 12, 2016


But sometimes a hypocrite is nothing more than a person who is in the process of changing.
— Dalinar (Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson)