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Re: Picking through the Rubble Break 2
Hey Col3 here for a review! Let's get into it! "The once great city was dead. The only sound was the blimps overhead with their tiger-chuffing as they pumped out ...
Mon Feb 28, 2022 6:01 pm -
Re: Chapter 1: Discovery
Hey Col3 here for a review! Let me just say wow. What a detailed and well written chapter. Now lets get into it. "Heavy rain was pouring from the skies ...
Fri Feb 04, 2022 3:36 pm -
Re: Chapter Five: ID Crisis
I'm back for another review! So it seems that Logan is now getting off of his bus and getting his key card. "“Sorry- um, 2023, I’m 17. Do you need ...
Tue Dec 14, 2021 5:35 pm -
Re: The Girl With Two Hearts: Prologue and Chapter One: The Coffee Shop
Hey! Here for a review! So first of all, I like how you decide to start the story. You don't beat around the bush and you get straight to it. ...
Fri Dec 10, 2021 6:47 pm -
Re: Chapter Four: Leaving
A lot of late but still love the story! When Camryn and Logan got separated, I felt so bad for them. I really loved reading this chapter, it was just ...
Fri Dec 10, 2021 2:06 pm -
Re: 3 - Nathan
Thanks for letting me know when this came out! OK so now for the review, I absolutely love this chapter, I mean with all this drama plus the typical older ...
Thu Dec 09, 2021 7:45 pm -
Re: An Anachronistic Aye, Chapter 1.1
Ok, so the title drew me in :) so here I am with a review! So lets start with the beginning "An asteroid floated calmly through space, maintaining a healthy ...
Thu Dec 09, 2021 6:18 pm -
Re: 2 - Kate
Oh wow, back for chapter two! First of all, I like this chapter as much as I liked the last chapter, so exciting. So in this story, in order to ...
Thu Dec 09, 2021 6:07 pm -
Re: 1 - Kate
Man, I read two words and i'm curious. As I read the chapter, I got a gist as to who the main character is like. I also enjoyed the fact ...
Tue Dec 07, 2021 3:21 pm -
Re: Chapter Three: Bugs and Bombs
Back again! I love this series! I like how Camryn was talking about going to war but is now scared of bombs. It shows the true nature of a 10-year ...
Thu Nov 11, 2021 1:40 pm -
Re: Where's Soda?
This nearly made me cry. I love the outsiders and Sodapop was one of my favorite characters. I love how well written this is, and how it includes details from ...
Tue Nov 09, 2021 8:27 pm -
Re: Chapter Two: Drill
Hey here for the second chapter! I must say I am so thankful I read this. It was just as good as the first chapter! I love how we still ...
Tue Nov 09, 2021 4:49 pm -
Re: More Than A Machine (Chapter 1: L'othaim's Rebellion)
Hey! Welcome to the site! I'll give you a little review of the story. I must say, it was a very good story. I enjoyed it very much. You did ...
Mon Nov 08, 2021 6:28 pm -
Re: Leona’s origin story-Eloise’s daughter.
This whole story made me so sad. The fact that Leona's mother never paid attention to her, but she still knew happiness but still did the things she did made ...
Fri Nov 05, 2021 7:50 pm -
Re: Chapter One: Cake
I'll be honest, this story had me smiling. I like Logan's personality, especially his love for cake! I loved it when he found himself in the lake because he wasn't ...
Fri Nov 05, 2021 6:16 pm
