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Thank you both for the replies. :D I have another song posted here, Ask Why, which is harder rock, if you are interested in hearing more of my work. I ...

Oh, thank you. That was all very helpful. See, it never occurred to me that the beginning was confusing–I only ever thought of open highway. What could make this more ...

Thank you for the consistently good reviews. :D I’m giving you more work than I should because I’m not editing. My approach is write first, edit later, so most of ...

CHAPTER I: Part Two “Who met with Signore Havlat before me?” “Oh, I... Signore Latten? Yes, I think it was Latten.” The secretary sniffed and took a deep breath. Serge ...

CHAPTER II It was an unsteady, washed dawn when Leland heard the car. The faint sound of an engine taking the early morning highway at a neat seventy-five. Leland had ...

Okay, did a little editing. Let me know if the hard to understand parts are any better. Once again, thank you all so very much. I’m really getting some constructive ...

Thank you. Your opinion does count. If you’re listening to the music, it’s on par with anyone else's. I’m very glad you like it. It’s one of my favorite songs ...

Thank you both for taking the time to read and review! It was helpful. I’m not an editor, I just throw writing out as fast as I can type. :P ...

This is in the completely wrong section, love. It needs to be in forum 14 ( ) Love Kris Thanks, love.:smt090 Many apologies, to the Mods.

Exactly so on the mess ups. It’s over-the-top kind of humor.:) What kind of music do you play?

Excellent suggestions on all counts. Yes, you found me out; I’m French-illiterate. As for the length I didn’t stop to think of that. This is my first attempt at play ...