Coaleman

Actually that's brilliant!! Do you mind if I use that? And yeah, I'll go check out your story now.

I enjoyed the story! But I found it hard to follow, as I haven't read any of your other works. I'm not familiar on the characters, so I won't give ...

Thanks for the feedback! -The lightning thing seemed and sounded right, and when it comes to writing, I don't put too much logic into it so much as what feels ...

I did, didn't I? Sorry, I'm reading "Everlost" again. One of the main characters is a Nick. And for James, his life revolves around books. I suppose I could try ...

Thanks for reading! -I do think that introducing an official term was important in the first paragraph, but I see your point. -It's a bit of a mystery, my friend. ...

Thanks, I suppose my style got in the way, huh? I'll see what I can do. Thanks again!