Cmacca

Thank you! I am terrible at grammar so I need all the help possible :)

Not harsh at all! I love getting feedback on my work and I take everything said into consideration. Especially the feedback on the dialogue, as that's something I've always struggled ...

That's okay! Don't worry about it! I'm a university student, and I'm in the middle of writing an essay, so I'm little paranoid about paragraphing at the moment. :)

This is me. I feel like I would have a much more productive life if it wasn't though! (productive but less creative)

I float in the embryonic fluid of the forest creek My favourite line.

Hey thanks for review. It has been very helpful towards improvements to my work. Would love to hear what you think about the other chapters when I finish them.

Hey thanks for the lovely encouragement. I did choose Athena for a reason, it refers back to the Greek Goddess Athena. I think the reasons for choosing this Goddess will ...