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Re: Underneath
nice poem but i think you caqn hide the true meaning more and make it slightly more poetic in doing so such as record sales and talk of money leads ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: This Crazy Game
nice poem really liked the "like hatchling dragon not taking the bait" painting the nice picture of getting frustrated and angry with people but not losing your cool...well atleast thats ...
Mar 31, 2007