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I know bumping is bad, but I really need more reviews on this... ^_^;; Much apologies. :(

*gasp* This is one of my most favorite books! EVER! It's so refreshing from typical romance. Two horribly wicked people destroying everyone around them for love. Amazing!

I love how this has gotten more reviews than anything I've ever posted. Or others. ^_^ Maybe that's what it's testing...?

Nidge, get back in your cage!! xD

*shameful revival of story* Wow, thank you guys! I wasn't sure people would actually like this... and if someone could teach me how to format, that would be very nice, ...

Yeah, it would. It doesn't stand out as much or disrupt the flow.

If this is based off "World of Warcraft" then this should be in the fan-fiction forum. I'm not sure how to flag a moderator. :oops:

Thank you for the review! I followed your suggestions and cleared up those sentences. I actually knew how to read Tarot when I was younger, but I've forgotten over the ...

*hugs* Thank you, Sam! You give the most helpful reviews. I was really unhappy with the ending of this, but you made all the right points and now I see ...

Whoa! Jiro does remind me of Cloud. High-five for everyone, FF7 is my one true love. :D Anyway... I don't recommend posting character summaries. I think your characters should be ...

Thank you, both of you! :D You're absolutely right about the dialogue, that will make it sound way more natural. And I love your advice, about assuming the character and ...

Thanks for the feedback. Of course you can use it in your signature, Sam! :smt053 I feel flattered. And you're right about cardboard characters. Must fix that upper... Thank you ...

Woo! Thanks everyone. I wanted it to be a hazy sort of story, but apparently I tried too hard. :oops: For clarification, it's about abortion. I guess I need to ...

Thank you for the feedback! It's all very helpful, and I'm taking all of the advice. I actually took the name Amelia from Amelia Atwater Rhodes and Dahl from Roald ...

I just wanted to add that I agree with Tatra - this story reminds me of the Dark is Rising. Why is that? I read it so long ago and ...