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Hey Cristjelly! Welcome to YWS. You might be wondering, "Why have I not received many reviews on this?" There's a very easy answer to this! We have a rule on ...

Hey Tiffany! Here is your prize for inadvertently winning a contest you didn't know was going on! --- I stood behind the hostess stand , mindlessly wiping down menus just ...

Here I come! --- “The lord is my shepherd; I shall not want. Through the valley. Through the valley. And my cup. Cup. It runneth. Over. The lord is my ...

Connie! I'm finally getting to something of yours. I liked the title of this one, so I've descended upon it. I think I'll move onto your other ones after this. ...

Ky, I'm catching up. --- The pale wedding train of the moon sluiced onto the floor of the hallway. Oh, this is such a nice description! --- This was truly ...

Ah, yes. I am glad amongst all this chaos I still have some works by you to review. Quite a lot actually, since I want to review that new story ...

Oh ~ lovely Suzer! This story is so intriguing, so you better not have anymore computer problems for a very extended period of time. I'm just gonna do general comments ...

Cat! Here I am. :) --- “Ms. Alexandria Blaylock?” The teacher looked up over her spectacles as she searched around the classroom. When I first read this, I actually thought ...

Ky! Ky! --- He could feel hate and fear and despair crawling all over him. Shaking. Shivering in the heat. The whole world dipping and sashaying, the shadows curved, alive,[s] ...

SUZER SISTER BRUISER! I went and quickly skimmed part two to refresh my memory. --- As soon as Savannah arrived with clothes for Aline to change into, she could leave. ...

Hey MidnightVamp! --- Well… He was gay. “Wait, what do you mean 'two gay men'? I'm straight, you know that.” Ellipses! Bah! ^_^ I think they destroy good sentences. See, ...

Hey Bolt! One review, coming right up! --- I was supposed to be matched with a couple today. Yet again I would fail to get them and be trapped in ...

Evi! :) --- I slip through the shadows reaching down to grab one just as another flash of lightning strikes. There should be a comma in there. "I slip through ...

Chill out. Chill. Out. I get it, the commas are experimental. You're allowed to do what you want. But, this coming from a peer who reads poetry and studies writing, ...

Suzer!