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Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3
OLIIIVIA. You mangly old coot, you. He managed to salvage the sim card mind you. He just didn’t have a phone to put it in I'm pretty sure it's SIM ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Of Mice and Men
I think Of Mice and Men is good. Easy to analyze, short, sad, full of good things... I didn't find it boring either. People seem to just have an aversion ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Two Entries for Cal's Contest
Hey Conrad! I'm glad you contacted me - I love reading/reviewing your work. Maverick The characterization in the first story is fun. Gillie is very endearing, and her connection with ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: Scavenger - 1.1
Here is I to saaave the daaaay! :lol: Wow, you've got a nice long story here. Let me get on this review! The wind lifted a corner of the poster ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Rooftop
Hey Cold - I'm sorry I took so long to get to reviewing this! Classes and work, you know? Life gets in the way of the good stuff. ;p It ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: First Three Entries for Caligula's Contest
Hey Conrad! I don't know why you don't get more reviews. I really enjoy your stories... people need to get on this! People! Get on this! Anyway, onto the review. ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 2
Oliiivvviaaaa. Summer was coming back to reality much harder than she could ever have imagined I don't really like this line. I think it's the "ever have imagined" part. I ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 1
Olivia! *glomp* I swear I would've reviewed this eventually. Yessirree... :oops: Oh well, I need to be gouged in that review topic of mine! I need to review! Well, onto ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: The Breathers - Prologue
Hey Happy, here I am, as needed! =D It is a common assumption amongst my kind that the first kill is always the hardest. I agree with Snoink's comment, about ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Serendipity In Hell; 1
Hey Sunny! I'm here to review, as requested for you! Yay! =D Tone In the intro, I don't really like the tone you use to bring us into the story: ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: How the Dog Saw it
Hey Thunder_dude, here I'm flying in to give you a review! I don't think the prompt was that awful. Somewhat trying! Challenges are fun, no? It's healthy to challenge ourselves ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race part 2
Hey Nutty! On to Part 2, yip! A lot of the thoughts and perspective is from the four year old's point of view. I find this as strange while reading ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: A Higher Race
Hey Nutty! Here to do my duty and review! *salute* The blocks tumbled across the rug, spreading around the child’s plump thighs in casual disarray. Slowly the child looked up, ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: I am Mentally Ill
Olivia, I'm here for you darling! =D You already have quite a bit of reviews on this, so I'm sorry if I repeat anything. I'll try to be brand spanking ...
Sep 29, 2008 -
Re: The Mist - A Novella by Stephen King
We're not strict in the Book Review section - you can really say whatever you want. I read the Mist, and I enjoyed it up until the end section. The ...
Sep 25, 2008
