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Hey Miz! I see you're new, so welcome to YWS! And thanks for PMing me - I'm here to help! I've noticed you haven't done any reviews yet, so I ...

Hey Dream! I understand completely your desire for more comments on character and plot rather than grammar bits. I will do that for you! After each review, if you have ...

Hey Dream! I totally reviewed this months ago - but I figure I'll review it again, since I get the impression you made changes to this story, and I'll give ...

Hey Niccy! I didn't think your post was too long - I don't think you should cut it in half next time. He lay on his stomach in the hammock ...

Hey Kylan! I absolutely love your writing, so I don't know why I haven't reviewed anything of yours in a while - I wish I had been more on top ...

Oh Suuuz- I love the cheery morbidity of this poem. It truly is fantastic, and a unique concept, or at least one I've never encountered before! Originality points for you. ...

Hey Cat! Your avatar is so cute! =D I stared out into the vast emptiness in front of me as I sat on my bed. My legs were raised to ...

Hey Sock! I read the link, and the concept for the story sounds very interesting. So I'll read it now, woohoo! I heard Jared open driver’s seat and lean against ...

This is a stunning combination of deliciousness and pretty girly-ness. I'm a little sad that the cake is a lie though. You could do some serious revisions where the cake ...

Hey RI - here on duty. *salute* :) Why did they play such music in the first place? I know what you're trying to say, but you left out a ...

Connnnrrr-RAD. I'm not a poetry connoisseur, but I saw this and thought, "Hey, I've been doing a pretty good job and reviewing him consistently, so I'll keep it up. I ...

Hey Maki! She was taking quick, small sips of her coffee, in the early morning. I think the phrasing would be more smooth here if you phrased it like this: ...

I've read too many books, egh. Hm, romance books. I recommend the Apple Vally Orchard series, but I don't remember who wrote them. I guess you could google that! Also, ...

So you don't want painful details? Alright, I'll be broad. :) I thought this was a very good poem. A really great analyzing of what happens in the moments before ...

[Disclaimer: Once I finish this awful paper that's due tomorrow, a review will be in place of this disclaimer] Disclaimer fulfilled! I am back. So, a selkie couple had been ...