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Hey Castles! Here is the first part of your winnings - yay! Jackie was highly aware of the bronze-haired girl seated beside her, a veiled madness hidden beneath her pretty ...

Connie! It did not take Creep one day to heal his wounds. Well - that's obvious! ^^ I think it would be best to keep such an obvious sentence. waiting ...

Hey Pawprint! I like your username - how cute! =3 My fingers easily sliced through the warm sand. Each grain just slipped through, never to be caught. The sun was ...

Ky -- I look at this and know I'm going to have a hard time critiquing it, because it's going to be borderline perfect and very experimental. Of course, I ...

First off, ouch. Don't put words in all caps. If you need to all-cap words, then you're not truly making a good point. Second, art is subjective. Personal. You'd be ...

Hey Merry! I will be your friendly neighborhood reviewer. ^^ Nitpicks I never liked him. Or so I thought. I like the intro - it grabs the attention and brings ...

Hey staples! This snagged my attention, and now I just have to review it! As is commonly accepted among figures of little importance, really weird things that end with you ...

Connie, my schnookums! I have read Jigs' and Jared's reviews so I, also, am expecting something as great as Horus here! Hehe! This is what we call prejudice, but I ...

Hey Ashgan - quite a long introduction you have there! It doesn't really matter how pretty the font is on Word, since any story you have published will have the ...

Connie, dear! Hopefully my internet won't ruin this review I'm about to type up with my mad skillz. Annoying Nit-picking First - Nag, nag, nag, That's All I do Whatever ...

Hey Dream! As I slowly make my way through this story... =3 As I slowly floated back into consciousness, I became aware that I wasn’t in my bed. My bed ...

Kylan! I love getting PMs from you, though it may take me a while to get to them. The ground is chapped. It is all cracked up and rough, like ...

Connie! *glomp* So, I told you on AIM had a nice wordy review for you, but then due to some bizarre internet mishap, the page reloaded and I lost it. ...

The Giver is a classic. Seriously, I think its started to be listed as a classic, or so it seems. Anyway, another really great book by her is Number the ...

Hey Kylan -- This poem was just absolutely amazing. I've been reading Alice Walker, Hurston and Hughes for a class, and it's all fresh in my head, and this poem ...