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Ky -- I apologize again for being so late getting to reviews. Maria's story is too hasty. I really love Maria's character, but I feel like her story is made ...

Connie! I'm not sure if you want these parts reviewed at all. I know you planned on making revisions. I'm sure my two cents can't hurt. I'm not going to ...

What in the --? Pork! My immediate reaction to this can hardly be put into words, let me step away from the laptop for a moment and think. Okay. Okay-- ...

Medusa! *hugs* I haven't read anything by you since, well, my contest. But it was a great while before that. And did you ever claim your prize? I need to ...

Hey Samantha! The story my dad always tells me is that: when our house burned down, I was trapped inside, and my mom died because she tried to save me. ...

Hey Ky-- I never feel the need to critique anything of yours line by line - you seem to obviously have an amazing skill with language and you know what ...

Hey Ky-- you sent me the link, and I realized I was behind a chapter. I have some catching up to do, but I'm excited to see where this story ...

Hey Sparrow -- You're fairly new! Welcome to YWS, then! Nitpicks & All That The group up ahead stopped all of a sudden. Dead end. A woman in the back ...

Hey Dream-- I almost forgot about continuing to review this. My bad! Ah! But here I go. Nitpicks Dewey patte my shoulder reassuringly as he took in my expression, “You’ll ...

Hey Gahks -- I don't usually review poetry, but I try to give the best reviews I can! I hope this is what you're looking for. my father flushes red ...

Lovey! I haven't seen much of you around. I'm so glad you're back! I can throw back tequila like it’s the end of the world salt burn bitter on the ...

Connnnieeeee. I'm not going to give you a line-by-line here, since you've got some awesome people doing that already. I'm going to give you the Kylan approach and just give ...

Hey Lolli! Nit-picking "Come back!" I squealed, chasing him around the park. Walker stopped suddenly and I toppled over him. He tickled me until I was earning the attention of ...

Hey Castles! This is a review for being a winner, haha, but at this point I want to review your stuff anyway because I enjoy your writing. :) In a ...

Hey Kylan -- I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this! I'm all over the place lately. Still PM me when you post, just expect my reviews ...