Cirute

You're quite welcome!

This story was quite nice. The style it is written in, the dialogue; everything about it screams emotion. I really can't criticize anything about it, aside from the things Birkhoff ...

Thank you for pointing those errors out to me! I'll get working on them right away! :)

Thank you for the review! Yeah, I know my semi-colon use is quite bad. I've never taken a creative writing class (Or really any writing class, aside from standard english), ...

Thanks, I really appreciate the review!

Thank you for your review, cC. I'll try to answer your questions to the best of my ability. To start, the work was edited to a certain degree, though I ...

Thanks, Hollyhuze! Your words mean a lot to me, I honestly didn't know I was even capable of writing something like this. The funny thing is my friends and family ...

Sorry, the story got me in trouble once already, and I thought that the 18 rating was the only way to go with this one.

Yeah, I know it's long, I'm going to chop it up into shorter chapters if I get a chance! Thanks for the review, it was really helpful! This was just ...

Oh yes, very much so!

Thanks a ton for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed my story! And just to clear things up, 'Masshole' is New England slang term for a person from Massachusetts.

Wow, this is good! Very dark and creepy, as well as being quite interesting. Honestly, I don't see anything to criticize. I hope to see more in the future!