Cinderquill

Thanks for the review! Honestly the fact that you didn't find any issues with this is kind of really surprising, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Aaa thanks! This was based on an idea i had (and I'm not too sure if I'm going to be working on this idea anytime soon as I'm pretty busy), ...

Notes that I can't fit in the freaking description: This is way longer than I intended it to be wow. I'm not really sure if this is any good; I ...

I'll keep in mind about how to separate my paragraphs. Usually I group my paragraphs based on the topic of what the paragraph is about, which is probably why that ...

Aa thanks for the advice! About the book series thing, yeah it%u2019s not very clear, but what happened was that my former friends thought the book series was the cause ...

ok thanks!

ah i see! Thanks for the criticism!

Note from author: The summary in the description is for the entire story that I'm planning to write and not just this specific chapter.