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Re: The Words Untold
This was really good! I loved this; it was written very well and... Well... is good! I have a question though, who is the narrator? I'm just curious about that. ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: And No One There Saw Him Cry
This was really good and had me hooked! You worded this very well and it is very good. There were a few mistakes though, at least that I saw. 1. ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: A War With No End Chapter 2
This was really good, but I did find a few mistakes. 1. "I nodded agreeably. I didn’t want to turn into a fry roast any more than the next man." ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: Revenge's Shadow Chapter 1
This is really good. The first paragraph grabs your attention and sets an air of mysterious ness that leads to you wanting more. The code names are very different, and ...
Jul 17, 2014