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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love, I'm Sorry

    I felt this way about 4 months ago to bad i didnt read it then

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I am human.

    why does every thing remind me of Eva...thats a good thing...I liked it gets to human levels and human mistakes

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My first post ever! Poems.

    if only i could write poety that well...sigh...I think it speaks volumes

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Love Poem of Sorts

    tell your friend it was good from Church...even though my status is quite low just leave the last part out ok

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Art of War: Part V_ Generals of Hate

    what battle are you going for or where are you trying to take this dont get me wrong I likes it war has always been my thing but what is ...

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Lone Templar

    sound so much like assains creed i want to play as the templar and it was like I was in the room with them that was good

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Whose footsteps?

    well it started off like it could go into deep sentimental stuff then left me hanging at the end with out a complete thought

    Jan 20, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Torment of the Mind

    first the names because it was the last thing I read -I couldnt think of a name so I left it blank -The whole story is...well it started as something ...

    Jan 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lyla. Part 1

    pregnent...definently pregnent...right its well writen and I liked it

    Jan 16, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I am God's Ventriloquist

    Ok...stunning in numorous ways...all good...Wow really liked the begining though dont know why

    Jan 16, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A moment (for you)

    reminds me of the song Ohio is for lovers but its writen better and without the screaming

    Jan 16, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Torment of the Mind

    Ty Kokobeans any input is great all veiwers I would like it very much if you would post a reply to help me on the next story "The Mind Program" ...

    Jan 16, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Bound for Glory: Our Brethren

    that was great and i really enjoyed it

    Dec 9, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Torment of the Mind

    I don't mind insomnia its perfectly fine your right about all of it and if i knew how i would fix it but i did it on word and tried ...

    Dec 9, 2007


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