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Re: Seeing Things Through Her Eyes
Hello it's Chuck again! I did the second part which is awesome. I liked it a lot and I think you should make this longer take your time don't rush ...
May 3, 2013 -
Re: Seeing Things Through Her Eyes
Hello. I did some work and fixed it: Izzy'sPOV "Izzy, have you sorted through those two boxes yet?" My mum yelled up the stairs to me. For weeks, she had ...
May 3, 2013 -
Re: Mari's Normal Life ~Chapter 1
Okay... Umm... Right... Ah Ha. A review you say? Yes that's right a review. Okay. If you insist. Right. I am [Insert Name Here] and I will be doing this ...
May 2, 2013 -
Re: The Cave
Okay for starters I have no idea how to review or give good advice but what I want to say is that I think this is really good. I think ...
Feb 27, 2013
