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Re: To Make the Earth Smile
Hello dear, I saw you had no reviews and I simply adore being the first reviewer so here goes! So I read your poem twice. The first time I finished ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Mother of the Savior: A Monologue
Wowzers Princess! Two nit picks really quick! 1. "This time I was walking down an empty street in city I'd never seen before." I think you meant "in a city" ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Without Words Screenplay
Hello MadHatter! I absolutely love screenplays! I work on my own all the time but had never thought of a no words one, that's a really cool prompt to work ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: An Almost Lover
Hey Joanne, I hate to be the meanie but I had a problem with this peice. It felt a litte confusing at first, the more I read the more I ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Mr. Darcy
Hellooooo Luna! How are you? I read your poem and I like it. There weren't any gramatical errors I caught off gaurd. The parts that don't seem to work for ...
Dec 17, 2010
