Christina44

You have a very beautiful way of writing. I like it alot. Your lyrics almost tell a story and it could be such a beautiful song with the right music. ...

I liked the way you used alot of symbolism in this peice. It was very well written and had my attention. It was clever the way you used all these ...

I didn't like the beginning much because it wasn't really intriguing, but as I read on it mellowed out. You should start off with a bang so that your readers ...

You introduced the chracters well. I honstly did like it, and I would like to read more. Just make sure that your readers don't get lost bewteen how your characters ...

I really got into it when the dialogue started happening. I like the beginning too though. I want to know more about Christine's past and what happend. You should somehow ...