Chloseph

I absolutly loved this! A few tweaks and it will genuinly be as good as anything you find published! *claps lots*. Right, I'll go through it line by line as ...

Overall I really enjoyed this; each line is explained clearly so the general meaning and feeling is understood, yet you do this without rambling at any points. I got such ...

I really liked this - short and sweet. I liked the simplicity, as with a subject like this it is often so easy to over-do flowery language and bulk it ...