Chloe

ul. I stand up, and suddenly a pulsating energy shoots through my fingers. I jump back, still holding on, but startled. I stare at it in amazement for a minute, ...

Wow. I reeeeally like this. It sounds almost like a letter to her lover, but within a diary perhaps as it's very personal. I like how you can just impartially ...

Hi, I think that most of the others on here have touched on this, but I don't think that you should be so blunt that you're writing about your rape. ...

Hi, good poem. I like the content, and I don't see anything wrong in what you have written. However, I think you need to work on the individual lines because ...

Heya, just want to say that it's a very good effective poem. You have set the scene and atmosphere well and I think it all flows. What I just want ...

Jodi Picoult is amazing; she inspires me. I love the way she makes you believe one thing, or suspect a certain character, then throws it back in your face. I've ...