ChiravianSkies

Fun Fact: In the Renaissance, Lefties were actually considered unnatural or even evil. Just wanted to point that out. XD

My secret? I look at their personalities/pasts/looks. For Hjerral, he was white like snow. And my mind wandered to vikings, then it wandered to the way they say things. Like ...

Oh. I guess that flew over my head. Sorry. :/

Thanks, Buggie. I just wanted to say something about the adoption, and if I've got the rest of the novel written or not. On the Ketani and Fleck thing, Fleck ...

Sorry, not a review, but I would recommend changing the rating from E to something higher. Maybe you could bring up a mature content thing too. I like the message ...

My Auntie says it. I can't keep a straight face whenever she does though. XD

This is epic. I died laughing a couple of times. Moooooobbbsss XD

Aye aye, cap'n. I'll be ready. :)

Heh. Sorry for telling you too late, but the new chapters are out. I never can be too thankful for the reviews! :D I've been trying really hard on dialogue ...

Merci! I've made the changes to the punctuation and capitalization and lowered the rating, which took a bit of messing around. (After 3 reviews pointing the punctuation out, it's time ...

Okay. This is the chapter that the main bad guy is showing his trouble. And it's not because he's evil of course. The years haven't been kind to him, and ...

Heh. It happens sixteen seasons later. Thanks for the review! I've got Chapter 2 out now too. Chapter 3 is in the works right now. (I love reviewing in the ...

Sadly, the Frozenmoon mice don't make a much larger appearance until book 2. Many of the main characters of the prologue show up in later chapters, though for Bansen I'm ...

Thank you for your review! This helps a lot, and I just realized I missed the commas before the end of a quotations. To answer the hopper/fuzzy confusion, it's a ...

Nice story! Let me review above. :)