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Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Six
Hey! I'm Maddie and I'm going to be reviewing your work this fine pre-review day! Well, what'dya know, a story with... Tech... in it? This seems rather cool. Demons in ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: The Voyage: Chapter 2
Hey! I'm Maddie and I'm here to review your work! So, I saw this and wanted to check it out. One of my starting complains would be your title. The ...
May 30, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Chapter 1
It's me again, here to review your work! Yep. Your prologue definitely seemed a first chapter. Well, anyways. I just want to say that I read through the chapter and ...
May 25, 2015 -
Re: Old Lives - Prologue
Hey. It's Maddie here for a review! First off, I have to say that I really liked this. The Point of View change is a bit jarring when reading it ...
May 24, 2015 -
Re: Glass Man as a Friend
Hello, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! First off, I'd like to start with how I have seen this happen before, with the evil "Man in the Mirror" ...
May 20, 2015 -
Re: Deadly Secrets: Prologue
Hi. I'm Maddie and I'l be here to review your work. First off. Good on you, actually getting enough points to post in this unusually expensive posting time. Great. Just ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 5
Hello. I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your fine chapter today. Sorry I couldn't get to it earlier. So, I've just got some general nitpicks. my attacker kept running Attacker ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Hockey Love
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! Did someone say Hockey? With a Canadian in Presence? Bwahaha. So anyways, onto the review. I have to say that I ...
May 13, 2015 -
Re: Half Past Never
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'm here to review your work! I looked at the title and was immediately sucked in by how cool it sounded. Then I go got the ...
May 3, 2015 -
Re: A memory of nothing
Hey! I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. First, I want to say that in order for me to even be able to review this, I had to copy/paste ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: Dinosaur Invasion: Chapter 4
Hey! I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! So, I haven't done much reviewing in the past few days for some reason. (I just *might* be a bit rusty.) ...
Apr 30, 2015 -
Re: A piece of The Crystal Man
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work. When you say more 'adult' I thought you meant something like more blood or gory details, even if you didn't tag ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Kaori's Treaty-Chapter One~ Hiding
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work today. I read your prologue,and I do say that I like it. If I didn't read the prologue, I'd just look ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Condemned in Red
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work today for the blue team. Well, this is rather cool. Rather cool indeed. I didn't expect the story to be about ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: messed up little paragraph about domestic abuse, don't read if you don't have a strong stomach
Hi, I'm Maddie and I'll be reviewing your work! Well, I usually stick to longer pieces right now, but I saw the title and wondered what would be so messed ...
Apr 24, 2015