Chirantha

Hey, no problem. I'm glad I had helped. By the way, I didn't read your comment until I started reviewing the 7th chapter, so If had repeated things about character ...

It was large, dark and judging from the eyes I had seen before Shouldn't it be 'judging from my memory'? I didn't say anything about blood C, and Vampire's can't ...

*Curiosity kills the cat* :D Okay, I'll wait and see. But please don't let them meet only after they both turned to adults. Please? *begs looking tearful* :cry:

I already said most of the things you said 'LOLephant' When reviewing, post your own ideas. Don't copy what other reviewers have said about the same story. You can get ...

No need to get offended 'Pink' but I think I already pointed out everything said in your "overall" But not in the way I wrote it, so it doesn't matter. ...

I think the character description is good now. Can some review this? Pleeeeease? :(

Firstly, anyone who is saying my character description sucks, give me an example of how to do it in a more better way. Than rating it saying that it just ...

Thanks for the review. I edited it, and I think it's better now. But, there are some things. Like, when I said "She kept the phone" I meant, she kept ...

Hey, Firestalker, what about my question? Okay, first I have to say that to put a name for your charater. I didn't even know if that character was a boy ...

Ahhhh, tenses. I hate those. :evil: I mean how can I start this with correct tenses. Can anyone show that to me? By examples of my own story. Please.

This poem is one of the best poems I had read.And it had a great and mysterious meaning inside every verse, just how a poem should be. I really like ...

Hey,thanks for reviewing the story. You know, when I said was elevan,I didn't mean it was Alex.The alien girl was elevan.see, He lifted out a girl,who looked no more older ...