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Re: Christmas Day
hi, the intent of the poem is quite deep, provoking intense emotion of someone who had lost his / her dear ones by a catastrophic accident, gathering all gives a ...
Oct 27, 2018 -
Re: she was my best friend
H, You wrote it well to pen down your feelings for your best friend. The poem sounds nice while reading it aloud. Out of all, these three lines " I ...
Oct 25, 2018 -
Re: a wind's words
Hi, It's a beautiful work you have done, which shows the behavior and nature of the playful wind. Here I love the part, " i sweep down and scatter packs ...
Oct 22, 2018
