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Re: DUET :Chapter 3:
WOW....I was....wow. That ending was unexpected. Him standing up to HERA was perfect. Bet they don't think he can't match her now. The perfect partners. M---I mean LAPIS should know ...
Jul 13, 2015 -
Re: DUET :The Prologue:
It was lost the moment I made that split second decision, I know the split second decision maybe noticeable, but this just keeps making me wonder what it is. I ...
Jul 13, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 7 - The Birthday
ruling over people*
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 7 - The Birthday
LOL good with trying to beat the others haha. And for some reason, when I do filler chapters, I like to put information in them. I don't like reading fillers ...
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 7 - The Birthday
Oh and English is my first languge, LOL, I'm just not good at it.
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 7 - The Birthday
Hey, question. Did I do good with the flashbacks??
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 7 - The Birthday
Haha, hazel actually have not hint of green too it, it a light brownish color to be honest. Oh and about her age (which too me a while to find) ...
Jul 12, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 6 - The Song
Oh Talia can explore the mausoleum, she just can't go somewhere in the house. Plus that's ____ ____. Thanks, and I had changed that part you're talking about. I guess ...
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter Two/ In A Past Life
you're very welcome
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: Guardians Awakening/Chapter One/New Beginnings
I've came, I've read it, I'm still in love with it. Few spelling mistakes but other than that still in love with it.
Jul 10, 2015 -
Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 6
Well good job there
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 6 - The Song
He didn't give her the pills....meh I'll clear that up for you soon. Actually it's a weird one but _____ ______ ____. Thanks for the review, it always helps. And ...
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: A Desperate Situation ch. 6
What? I haven't even read pt. 5 yet. Starfire! I will read and review this right after the fifth one.
Jul 9, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 6 - The Song
So I'm guessing the title fits like Vivian said??
Jul 7, 2015 -
Re: She is Death Pt. 6 - The Song
Well first remember that her parents were murdered when she was 11, I think that's what I said. She still calls them Momma and Daddy, even though she's in her ...
Jul 7, 2015
