ChimeraMania

Well I glad you liked Pt. 10 to my short story. I LOVED your comments, even though Dye is a she and ...... See I want to say so much ...

By the way, it's getting closer to the end. I'm trying not to do filler chapters because this is still a short story, so I'm trying to make it at ...

On his car, only the outside of the windows are tinted. Meaning he can see clearly out but they can see clearly in. Like a cop car. Thanks for the ...

Thanks for being the first to comment VIV... Yeah I missed writing this and the other day I was trying to figure out what to do and I came across ...

Yay!!!! Make sure you tag me or post a link to it on my profile. Since I hardly get on that'll be best in helping me remember.

Just don't forget to tag me. Oh and I've read and reviewed it shuggs.

Carlito hit all the right points. I didn't really see any technical (changeable stuff) in here. I'm glad this chapter was lengthen though. It's a very good length for this ...

Oh I love chapters with action like these, shoot - I love books like this, even if it's practice of a simulation.

Ah okay. Hey good luck with the rest of review day. I have to take a little break before continuing, although I'm on Chapter 9 pt. 2. So when I ...

having won her over, and, by extent, assuaged any concerns Take out the first comma here, that's my only advice for this chapter. I'm ready to go to the next ...

They held each other tight, and for a moment, Verona everything that had happened in the last couple of months, all the times Verona had cursed Lani for not being ...

Ah, got you. Well I can't wait for the next chapter shuggs.

I feel he might have an emotional breakdown to where he just blerts everything out

Yeah that's more better its more in the line with ththe laat book and the other chapters. In two to three chapters he need to realize what he's doing or ...

Ugh autocorrect. I'm using my phone. I meant that's who's relationship and chapters down the road.