ChimeraMania

Now that I go back through a skim through the other chapters, I notice the year but like myself, some people skip right over that, so you can also incorporate ...

The added words definitely helped the chapter, I feel you wouldn't have added them to the next one but they fit so well in this chapter. Good job on that. ...

I just realized this but you have (Chapter 3: ) this at the beginning of the chapter but Chapter 4 in the title.

Psh, gave me something to do in my philosophy class. I never do anything in here because my instructor is just teaching from the powerpoint that he has posted online. ...

Thanks and good luck

Ah, never hear that word before when referring to nipple, but now I do so YAY.

Oh and I did cover that in previous chapters but all those chapters are from the other MC's POV this was the only chapter that has his POV. Although I ...

Love you the first thing you suspected was a plot twist.

Thanks for your review. I will make sure to make these corrections.

Again nothing was confusing and I'm actually glad you came for this chapter as well. Now before you read the other chapters I'd like to go back and change a ...

Thanks for reviewing. I'm taking all this in to consideration. Makes me want to go back and look at all the chapters and make sure her personality shines through even ...

Thank you very much and I will try what you suggested because I do wanna finish this piece and see where it goes. So I will try.

Okay I understand what your saying and I agree with you. Thanks for that. I had written this a long time ago, actually I don't even know when I wrote ...

Well at least I hope it will.

O_o,s he forgiving Jace, does this mean it's over? Ah can't tell you, but I do have a couple of chapters left. The next one will shock you.