Chickensandwitch

Oh, this sounds interesting *glues eyes to screen* I shall attempt to nitpick this as I'm reading it, but I have a feeling I won't be able to find anything. ...

hola forsakinshadow! I'm going to review this now... (I can never think of anything witty to say before I review something.) grammar edit word edit comments Anyways, here I go: ...

Hello Lena! Here is my review: grammar word editing my comments Two months. It scares the shit out of me to even think about it. Only two little months. Two ...

Hello! I'm going to review your story, and then tell you what I thought of it as a whole. grammar editing word editing comments Welp, here I go.. Preface Gently, ...

Okay, this is actually my first real attempt at reviewing someone's work. I usually don't read fantasy stories- ever, but I'm interested in what happens to the baby. Anyways, I'm ...

This is very interesting. I'm not sure I really like the main character (I don't know why, but that happens a lot with me...) But I like Liam and the ...

I love this so far. The first chapter was written a little bit awkwardly but this one sounds better; also I like the change in views. Grammarwise, I don't know ...