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Re: Too much Snow
Is this an epic? A narrative or a supposedly poem? well from the foregoing, I recommend you meet a poem editor. It's a nice piece nonetheless yet I feel obliged ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: Faded First Loves
Sincerely I like the story. It has a good line nevertheless, it has more of a report-like accent. The development wouldn't be such as difficult as you would be thinking ...
Jun 23, 2013 -
Re: The Roman Fights:Ch.1 Sparta
A very great off-thought with so much to offer when properly developed. First, the background should be attacked with cultural undertones and then intermingling of themes associated with the Romans. ...
Jun 17, 2013
