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  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Little Mermaid

    I really like your poem, it's a very condensed but clean cut version of the fairy tale. I also like that the last sentence is it's own little stanza. You ...

    Jan 26, 2016


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman