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Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1
You impressed me with this. I found some minor errors throughout. Alot of them were simmiliar to these: which stood out of her powdered face. Should be: ...which stood out ...
Apr 5, 2007
You impressed me with this. I found some minor errors throughout. Alot of them were simmiliar to these: which stood out of her powdered face. Should be: ...which stood out ...
Apr 5, 2007
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